Mar 24, 2007

मी तिच्यात नव्हतो


मी तिच्यात नव्हतो पण ती माझ्यात होती
तीची नव्हती कधी पण माझी साथ होती


मी आजवर कदीलांच्या उजेडात जगलो
ती चमकणा-या ता-यांच्या प्रकाशात होती


तीचा प्रवास होता मोठ्या महामार्गावरचा
माझी ती बिचारी लहान पायवाट होती


तिच्या स्वप्नांना दोरखडं जखडलेले नेहमी
माझी कधीही सुटणारी निसरति गाठ होती


तीच सुखांशी नेहमी अजोड नातं गुफ़लेल
माझ्या वाट्याला दुःखंच भरमसाठ होती.


नेहमी साखर झोपेची तिची पहाट रोजची
मी डोळे मिटले नाही माझी सदा पहाट होती.


तिच्या ओठी नेहमी हसु उमलायच सुखाच
माझ्या डोळ्यानां नेहमी आसवांची साथ होती


तिने कधी हात जोडले नाहीत कशासाठी देवापुढे
तीच्यासाठी देवळात नेहमी माझीच वरात होती


आज म्हणतेय मी चुकली पण काय फ़ायदा
खरच फ़ार उशीरा तीची ही साद होती.


मी स्मशांन वाटेवर असताना तिला कळाल
आज म्हणे ती दिवसभर देवळात होती.



सुधीर ....

मनापासुन ........ मनापर्यत. .......

43 comments:

  1. very nice poem...

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  2. HI THISE IS kamini FROM MUMBAI(VIRAR) MALA TUMCHI KAVITA FAR AVDALI . CAN YOU PLZ SEND ME MORE ON MY PERSONAL E-MAIL ID IE (manakavi_87@yahoo.co.in) i also wontto know your e-mail id.

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  3. hi sudhir

    tuji kavita khup chhan aahe
    'mi tichat navto' hi kavita janu maana la lagun geli
    kay mi tujya aankhi kavita vachu shakto maje mail id :-pkarade@gmail.com

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  4. hi,
    nayna here too good poem. i like it. keep it up.

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  5. sudhir.............

    want to publish a kavita sangraha???... i can help u

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  6. hi i am krish,
    tuzya kavitet kuthuntari aatla saad na bolta samor yeto. kharach tuz mann far sundar aahe. keep it up.

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  7. tuzya kavita sparshun jatat manala,
    tuze shabd nava arth detat premala

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  8. SUDHIR............
    Tujhe Vichar Aani Manat le Shabd kiti Sunder Aahet.
    Tujhi Kavita Hrudyala lagun geli Aaahe. Mala tujhe Khoop Kavita vachayche aahet.Mazye E-mail ID war Pathavshil Please.......... tausif.gt@gmail.com

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  9. Hi Sudhir,

    Tuzhya kavita khupch chhan aahet. Sahaj samajanare, manala patatil ase bhavpurn shabd aahet. kavitetil prateyk shabd manala lagun jato.

    Tuzha tuzhya kavita lokapryat pohachvanyyacha ha marg chaan aahe. pan tya ajun khup lokapryat kadachit pohachlya nastil. so tya karata kahitari navin kar jenekarun tuzhya kavita sarvaparyat pohachtil.

    Mala tuzhya ajun kavita vachayachya aahet.
    Please send on my email id: rupalid3@yahoo.co.in

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  10. मना मना च्या गोष्टी असतात सगळ्यांना त्या सांगता येत नाही काही त्याना सांगून टाकतात काही ना सांगता येत नाही

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  11. आटवणी सांभाळने सोपे असते मान चा कोपर्‍यात त्याना टेवटा येते पण सण सांभाळने कठीण असते शनात tycha आटवणी होतात

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  12. Hi Sudhir,

    This Pallavi from mumbai(dombivli),
    mala tujhya kavita khupch aavdlya, pratyek kavitet kahitar aaplya manatalech aahe ase watate. tujhya sarv kavita pratyekachya manatale bhav bolun jatat.
    If possible, please tujya kavita majhya id madhe pathavta yet astil tar please patav.
    majha id- palprachi_413@yahoo.co.in

    kharech tujhya sundar kavita ashach saglyanparyant pohchu de hich ek kamna.

    All the best for your next career.
    with Care & best Regards
    Pallavi

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  13. hi sudhir
    mala tuzya kavita far aawedlya.tuzya kavita manala sparshun jatat . keep it up.
    best of luck for u r next kavita
    jeswin sonone ( nallasopara)
    jamela ter mala jeswin_44@rediffmail.com ver kavita mail ker

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  14. Hi Sudhir,
    Me tujhya kavita wachlya ahet.
    Tujhya kavita manat khup kholwar rujtat. Kavita wachatana watat ke janu kahi tu majhya manatale bhav ya kavitet utarwale asawet.
    Tujhya kavita barach kahi sangun ani devun jatat.
    Asach tu kavita lihit ja ani khup motha ho ya majhya tula shubhechya.

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  15. hi sudhir..ur poems really good...so touchy....but y all are so Sad....
    I would love to read ur happy poems if u r having any.....could u plz mail me at (kavita9820@gmail.com) .

    regards,
    kavita

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  16. send more poems on abhishekchess2000@rediffmail.com

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  17. जे आपल्याला आवडते ते इतरांपर्यंत पोहचले पाहीजे.
    असा लहानसा प्रयत्न आहे.म्हणूनच मला वाटते .
    की तू सूद्धा आमच्या अड्डयात सामील व्हावे .
    एकदा येऊन पहा आमच्या ब्लोग अड्डयावर .

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  19. NAMASKAR MITRA SUDHIR,

    AAMAHI JYOTISHACHARYA AKASHIJI ,
    AAPLI KAVITA AIKLII............
    ANI APLY KAVITETALE SHABDA AAMHALA,
    VICHAR KARAYALA BHAG PADLE.............
    KHARCH KHUP CHAAN LIHILE AAHET AAPEN.
    ASECH CHAAN CHAAN TUMCHYKADUN LIHINE HOWO, ASHICH PANDURANGACHYCHARNI PRARTHANA.

    JER ASE KHI KAVITA ASEL TER AAMHAS AAPEN PATHWU SHAKTA.
    alankar_in_astro007@yahoo.co.in.
    AAPLY UTARACHI AAMHI WAAT PAHAT AAHOT.
    KEEP IT UP.............
    ALL THE BEST.

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  20. Apratim.....

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  21. Hi Sudhir ............
    tuji kavita khup chhan aahe
    Me Computer Hardware shiktoy,ani mala HTML madhe khup awad ahe. me Vikhroli Madhe Rahato me ek DJ Operator ahe me swataha Computer warati Songs Remix karato tar mala maze DJ Songs tuzya sarakhi Publish karawayachi echhaa ahe me Dreemwhever madhe mazi site banawleli aahe fakt ti mala net warati lanch karaychi aahe tar mala tuzya thodya HINT chi garaj aahe. Mala Mahit aahe tula khup lokanche Replay yetaahet tula sarwannach uuttar detan halat hot asel pan plzzzzzzzzzzzz mal mail karun Sangshil ka ...?
    nahitar tuza contact no. milelka..?
    wedant_ganesh@yahoo.co.in this is my email ID.
    so send me your Hint.
    Bye & Take Care
    & Keep it up writing Your Poems.

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  22. hi sudhir me prakash rahanar mumbai andheri me tumchya kavita vavhalya mala tya far avadalya vachun anand jhala krupaya jar apan mala kavita majya mail id var send karal ka me apla abhari rahil e mail id prajeev000@yahoo.co.in JAI MAHARASHTRA

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  23. NAAD KHULA..............
    Mala tujhya kavita Khup Aawadlya.
    Mihi kavita lihito pan TUJHYA Itkya changlya lihushkat nahi.......
    Jamle Tar mala tujhya ankhi kavita pathav.
    Majha E-Mail ID Aahe.
    sandylovingu@gmail.com
    hilovelysandeep@yahoo.co.in

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  24. HI THIS IS SARKA FROM MUMBAI(PRABHADEVI) MALA TUJYA KAVITA FAR AVDALYA . CAN YOU PLZ SEND ME MORE ON MY PERSONAL E-MAIL ID

    sarika1617@rediffmail.com

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  25. HI SUDHIR..

    This is Monika from Mumbai(dadar).

    U R REALLY GREAT.

    MALA TUZYA SAGALYA KAVITA FAR AAVADLYA.
    ONE QUESTION IS THAT...

    TU KAVITA TUZYA GHADLELYA AUSHYABADDAL LIHTOS KI TULA KONTYAHI SITUATION VAR KADHIHI KAVITA SUCHTAT?

    WHATEVER IS UR ANSWER BUT REALLY U R TOO GREAT...

    CAN ANYONE POST THEIR POEMS ON UR BOLG OR NOT?
    WAITING FOR REPLY...
    monika.dhumal@ril.com

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  26. Dear Sudhir,

    Tumchya kavita far chan aahet.mala khup aavadtat.tumchya kavitan madhe ek gupt rahsya aste.

    Ashach kavita lihit raha.ji kala tumchyakade aahe ti ya jagat far kami lokankade aahe.

    Tumhala tumchya pudhachya kavitan sathi manapurvak subhechha.

    jar shakya asel tar tumchya kavita mala personal email ID var mail kara hi NAMRA VINANTI.

    @WISH YOU ALL THE BEST FOR FUTURE@

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  27. Tumchya kavita far chan aahet.mala khup aavadtat.tumchya kavitan madhe ek gupt rahsya aste.

    Ashach kavita lihit raha.ji kala tumchyakade aahe ti ya jagat far kami lokankade aahe.

    Tumhala tumchya pudhachya kavitan sathi manapurvak subhechha.

    jar shakya asel tar tumchya kavita mala personal email ID var mail kara hi NAMRA VINANTI.Maza email ID:-yash.penkar@gmail.com

    @WISH YOU ALL THE BEST FOR FUTURE@

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  28. SUDHIR...............
    TUZYA KAVITAN MADHALI SARVAT APRATIM ASHI KAVITA.
    KEEP IT UP, ALL THE BEST,

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  29. SUDHIR...............
    TUZYA KAVITAN MADHALI SARVAT APRATIM ASHI KAVITA.
    KEEP IT UP, ALL THE BEST,

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  30. hi, sudhir

    Kitti chan lihta tumhi, tumchya sarva kavita vachalya sarva eka pekshya ek sunder, konachi tari aathvan denarya,
    kasa kay jamala tumhala, karan mi swataha pan kavita lihnyacha prayatna karte pan tevadh kahi sunder jamat nahi, tumchya sarkhya,
    khup chan lihata tumhi,
    ek request aahe, navin kavita lihalya ki, mala mazya email ID var send karal ka?
    Maza Email ID Aahe
    sheetal1983_sawant@ymail.com

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  31. Naad Khula....!!!
    masatch.....
    hiiii sudhir...i am Juee....

    mala tumchya sarv kavita avadalya...
    plz mala tumchya ankhi kavita vachayala avadtil....tumahla jamlyas mala tumchya ajun kavita mail karnar ka...plzz????

    ekdum sunder kavita aahet tumchya...

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  32. simmmmplyy greattt....
    1 numberrrrrrr
    mastach....
    kharach khup sunder kavita ahet....

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  33. kharach tuz man khup khup moth aasel.

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  34. sudhir hi kavita kharech manala sparsh karte...
    kharech ekdum sunder kavita aahe hi..
    mala aankhi kahi kavita aasel tar mala tu kalavshil..
    wish u all the best for u r future...!!!!

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  35. really an eye opener for me.

    - Robson

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    ...Chetan

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  38. kharach khup ...chan kavita lihito re tuu ........

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  39. SANKYA

    HI KAVITA KHUP CHAN HOTI MANALA GUNG KARNARI

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  40. harch Kup Chan Aahe Kvita.........

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